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Sweat
Instincts taken over
Body on Body
Skin to Skin
pressing, shoving
whispers without meaning
wanting, needing
forbidden love
come to me
inside me
just stay
as we collapse
meld into one another
I am you
You are me
my completor
my lover
my obsession
my life
I will burn in your arms
just hold me tight
forever
just that word
watch me explode
watch me live
But are you willing
to watch me die?
©2006-2010 ~KieraTrinlie
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I don't normally write in true open format, however... this was a test to see if I could do it....

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:iconfaerieofwind:
It's kind of erotic :giggle: Nice! :clap:

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Andrea.....you are the messiah of imagery. This is AWESOME. I completely love this poem.

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I love you :)
:iconkieratrinlie:
awww thankies!!!

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:iconkieratrinlie:
yeah... well...
meh... not quite the way I wantd it but it turned out okay I guess...

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Trade yourself in for the perfect one
No one needs to know
That you feel you've been ruined.

Trade yourself in for diamond eyes
Watch the stars collide
As you're lifted from your burden.

~Dimond Eyes
~Shinedown
:iconwinnietiggerowl:
I feel all tingly inside cuse like i totally understand ur meaning behind thiszerry goodz poem.

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the scars remind me of the worst

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